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PERFECT PRINCESS
Once upon a time
A time not long ago
There was a princess
Those who knew her marvelled at her perfection
She was the most beautiful princess in all of the lands
She had long silky hair
A fair complexion as pale as snow
She had wide eyes, ever so innocent
A red lipped luscious mouth
Her clothes were always fashionable without being to seductive
For she was the perfect princess

She watched the world through sad eyes
In her eyes the world was broken
She had so many responsibilities
Knowing she was viewed as the ultimate perfection
Feeling the pressure of having to act the part
She couldn’t be herself
Never being able to show her faults, her loneliness her imperfection
For she was the perfect princess

Tears always flowed like an angry river
They streamed down like an uncontrollable flood
But they only spilled when she was alone
Anger, fear, sorrow and helplessness rear their ugly heads
They have no outlet; they must remain hidden like a dirty secret
For she was the perfect princess

She must be there for those who seek her guidance
For those who seek her comfort
For those who seek her strength
For those who seek a moment of perfection
For she was the perfect princess

She was always the shoulder to cry on
She was always the one to depend upon
She never wanted anything for her kindness
She never swore or let her emotions be known
For she was the perfect princess

How was the world to know what was going on inside?
All we ever saw was perfection
How could we have seen her loneliness?
All we ever saw was happiness
For she was the perfect princess

Was it our fault what happened?
Should we have seen through the act?
How can someone fake such perfection?
She never complained that we were burdening her
For she was the perfect princess

She walked to the top of a tower one day
She stared over the edge
The people who depended on her becoming a distant memory
No longer caring what would happen to them, yet afraid to leave them
For she was a perfect princess

She thought pleasant thoughts of all those people
She stepped off her tower
She fell so gracefully
Even in death she looked so perfect
For she was the perfect princess

Maybe if we hadn’t burdened her with all our problems
Maybe if we had listened to hers
Maybe if we hadn’t been so self obsessed
Maybe if we had shown that we didn’t care if she wasn’t perfect
For she was not a perfect princess

She had her faults
We were too blind to see
She was so alone
We were too unfair
For she was not a perfect princess

We forgot that no one is perfect
She couldn’t handle our pressure
We forgot that everyone needs an outlet
She felt she couldn’t tell us her problems
For she was not a perfect princess

There is no such thing as perfect
Everyone has their problems
Just because someone seems like they have it all
Doesn’t mean they don’t have problems to
For there’s no such thing as a perfect princess

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  • Current Residence: tassie
  • Interests: anime
  • Favourite movie: dude wheres my car
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  • Favourite genre of music: punk,rock,goth
  • Favourite poet or writer: laurell k hamiton
  • Favourite game: halo3
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  • Personal Quote: if at first you dont succeed it probably wasn't worth doing
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:iconvygnaskrl:
thank you kindly for the :+devwatch:.

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:iconifyoucanmakeme:
Thanks so much for the favorite! Is there any tips you can give me to improve?
:iconperfectprincesss:
I dont think there anything u can do to improve its awesome as is
:iconifyoucanmakeme:
Gosh! Thank you so much! Do you have any favorite parts then? I'm running on no imput from anyone here, it's like flying blind ^^;
:iconperfectprincesss:
the second third and forth paragraphs are my faves but i realloy love the character i cant wait to read more
:iconifyoucanmakeme:
Thanks! That's the first helpful thing anyone's said. I'm working on the sequel as I we speak =)
:iconpride85:
Thanks for the watch, and a very nice gallery as well. I am gonna watch you :)

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:iconsilver-revlis:
Hey, thank you for the watch!

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